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Hello everyone, I have created this blog so friends, family and anyone whose interested can look at what I have been learning at school. I hope you enjoy it
Emma I think you have made some good arguments for why police should not carry guns. Watching your video I think you should try to make more eye contact with the audience. Good luck.
ReplyDeleteA beautifully written, persuasive speech, EH. You timed it to perfection and made effective use of rhetorical questions. I agree with the above comment that your presentation could benefit from more eye-contact with the audience -I am sure that you are already working on memorising your speech which will make this easier:)
ReplyDeletemore eye contact emma! let me see your beautiful big blue eyes!!!! but its very good with what you did with the preschoolers. But at the start when you were talking about how many policemen got shot, that sort of made me think that they should carry guns right at the start of your speech? but thats just my mind playing. Its really mean and awesome and like totally better than mine so good luck man
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